Sunday, August 19, 2012

What Is It

One day I was just walking my dog until I found  a cylinder type thing well I couldn’t help it I entered it of course and there was some strange, portal type thing I stuck my hand in just to see what it was “AHH” I yelled I was getting pulled in “woosh”there, I was in some strange digital world I had A quick sit down it almost was if I was in Minecraft.I knew what Minecraft was. I mean who doesn't? There was thousands of creepers,ghost and zombies I didn’t know if i was on creative mode or survival mode. I heard groans. Oh no I suck at survival I'm going to die I said.

Under my breath Eden I said to myself make a sword just make a sword and you’ll be okay. So I ran to find something to make a sword out of.Okay now just make a little hut thing to survive. It kind of felt like I was being controlled,but I knew how to survive in a situation like this so there I was running in minecraft like a madman I made a little mansion thing but it was like crossed between survival and creative mood so I got some animals and lava so if I was under attack they would have to be smarter because other ways they wouldn’t see Christmas  and that only was
only 5 months away but I knew for a fact I was going to be out of here in no time. I made myself a bed for the night it was a creepy place with blue walls red carpet haunted type place to be in fact it had a strange smell almost like diesel for those people who doesn't know what minecraft is it’s pretty much a digital world. Please don’t ask me why I was stupid enough to adventure into it now i I was getting feed up with my conscience.

13 comments:

  1. Amazing Eden. That is amazing writing it so good. I like the ending the most.

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  2. Awesome writing Eden!
    Wonderful writing Eden.
    Would you like to visit this world in real life?
    Well done:)

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    1. I wouldn't really it would be a bit scary but thanks for the comment

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  3. Cool Eden!
    I really like you writing it is very interesting.
    My favourite part is when you got sucked into a digital world and then you figure it out that it is Minecraft.

    From Lizard:)

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    1. Thank you so much Casey I love your comment it super cool I found it hard what to write about did you? also I thought it would be cool for a female to make a post about minecraft so there we are :)


      From Eden

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  4. Awesome writing Eden!
    Cool Writing!
    What is your favourite part.
    WELL DONE:)

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  5. Awesome Eden!
    You have really use your thoughts and how you feeling in this piece of writing. I like the start where you jump into the portal and adventure into Mine craft.

    I really like the game but I don't think I would like to be watched over by zomibes and other scary creatures. Well done this post is awesome and I also like how you put the photo up of how you got this idea. Well done:)

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    1. Thank you do much tash I love to revive comment like that thank you so much

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  6. Awesome Eden.
    I love your writing it is great.
    I think the ending is great.
    What is your favourite part?

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    1. Thanks I'm actually make a part 2 but I really don't know what will happen my favourite part is the whole thing because I'm super duper proud of my writing and how I've progressed but other wise thanks for the wonderful comment Eden :)

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  7. Cool Eden!
    I like how you've written a great story about minecraft!
    Do you know how to make a sword in minecraft? I do.
    What was your mansion thing made of like Wooden-planks, Cobblestone, dirt or something else?

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    1. Thank you Stefan
      I thought it would be an funny and good idea for a female to write a story about Minecraft I do know how to make a sword but I'm just not very good at survival mode the mansion was made from anything because i was in trouble so any thing i could find it's very dramatic I'll screen print so photos from Minecraft so it's really real but thank you for the comment

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