Saturday, June 2, 2012

WALT:Persuade

Dear teachers and pupils and viewers,

I personally think that we throw away perfectly good food for no reason I think we should put compost bins in every classroom.Or put it in our lunchboxes and maybe even get separate bins for food scraps and plastic and we could easily reuse and recycle. Few people from every class to care for the worms and gardens I think its a good thing to do? I mean look around you there's food scraps and litter all around us can you help us get clean and mean It's shocking.I mean in the trash vortex its full of litter and food scraps and sadly dead animals. I wish we could just learn not to litter nor throw away perfect food it could even help someone in Nigeria and South Africa. I say yes we can you might be one of those people who don’t care about the rest of the world animal but humans ourself are killing the nature and even each other!

6 comments:

  1. Great Eden
    I think people will get the message
    What was hard about writing this persuasive writing?

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    1. Thank you Katrina
      Uhm I found it really hard to write Did you ?

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  2. Awesome Eden
    very persuasive and you used heaps of different reasons
    From Brody

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    1. Thank you so much for the comment
      it was pretty hard to find heaps of different reasons but i got there in the end From Eden :)

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  3. Cool Eden!
    Your writing is very persuasive like Brody said.
    You put lots of emotive language in this piece of writing.
    What is your favourite thing about writing?

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    1. Thank you so much for the fantastic comment when I'm writing I like to just let my feeling out in my writing and I just think its so peace full Stefan what's your favourite part in your writing and I find it fun to be persuasive

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