Tuesday, June 19, 2012

My letter to V.M Jones

Dear V.M Jones,

Hello I’m Eden, my class just finished your story, Buddy, we all thought it was emotional. I felt so Sorry for Buddy because of the way he was treated. I could make a text to self connection because my mum works for people that are intellectually handicapped.

The story was humorous as well as heart touching and beautiful. My favourite character has to be Chantelle she seems really nice and stunning and Josh on the other hand just seems like a typical jock, but he is still cool. I can also make another text to self connection because Josh plays soccer and so do I. Where did you get the idea of Josh and Buddy?

I love to write and while we were reading your book it gave me lots of inspiration for my own personal writing. I really appreciate your writing and the time you took to write such a spectacular piece.

Enjoy your writing, I hope you can reply to my letter via this post or email.

yours  sincerely,
Eden D-W


  1. Wow eden
    Your letter to V.M Jones is alsome
    you used really distinctive words

  2. Wow Eden this is a great letter.
    I am sure that Mrs V.M. Jones will love you letter.
    Well done Eden :)

    1. Thank you so much floss
      i hope she will like it and
      i hope she will reply Thanks for the comment

  3. That is so cool.

  4. Cool Eden

    Your letter to V.M. Jones is awesome. I really like how you thought that Josh was a typical jock. I love how you said it was a spectacular piece

    Courtney :)

  5. Well done Eden, excellent letter xxx

  6. Excellent letter writing Eden!