Monday, April 30, 2012

Monday mornings

“Get up!” Dad woke me up by yelling at my brother.
“Yawn!” I knew I was going to be the next victim.
So I quickly jumped up put my clothes on and I was off.
It's freezing out here better run and get my computer and get some breakfast before I knew I was off.
The silk tree out the front  looked like delicate cobwebs from morning dampness all I wanted to do,was hide under my blanket I was as bad as a slug.
So I finally got up “Okay!” I’m gonna get up if it kills me everything was beautifully quiet.

Birds chirping, wind blowing, the water glistening from the road. Te mata peak with his big goofy smile New Zealand truly is stunning as I walked past Sugar Queen cakery. The roof  seemed to look like sticky lollipop. 

I continued my walk  seeing the smiles on everyone's face. I finally got to school. I was so happy seeing everyone after  the holidays, I was showing everyone the pictures, and souvenirs and my top I got from How To Train Your Dragon.  “Ding ding ding!” as the bell went I was jumping with joy seeing Mr M and learning new stuff, but the day went too quickly.


  1. cool story its really awesome

  2. I agree with Seth, Eden. The ending makes me so proud. Thank you!

  3. Wow Eden great writing:)
    I really enjoyed reading this!
    Great use if words:)

  4. Awesome Eden!
    This is a great piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading your story!

  5. Wow Eden. That is a cool story. Well done.

  6. Awesome Eden wHat a great story.WELL DONE!!!

  7. WOW Eden!
    I love this piece of writing. It has lots of WONDERFUL words in it. I didn't want to stop reading! Thats how good it was!
    Keep up the OUTSTANDING work Eden:)